fair trade
this week we made some sack art on fair trade. You might not know what fair trade is. well it is a thing were jobs pay workers get paid more money and don,t get put in dangers areas. Thomas and i writ a poem on a sack that came from a fair trade cafe and we found coffee beans. you can read the poem we made on the sack.
we panted it with paint and put a pitcher on it and stuck it on the wall.
the whole class did it and we all enjoined doing it and it was a bit of a challenge for me but it was fun.
Fair trade
their spirits fade
they barely get paid
they can,t even play
they need fair trade.
This is the best poem out of all the class. and it needs nothing to improve
ReplyDeleteI beg to differ Thomas just think about Zak's poem.
DeleteHi Tyler, Jakob here and I really love your poem. I think it sends a great message about the need for help with child labour. Next time you could make your poem longer or make the start of the sentence start with something other then they or their. Did you and Thomas think of it all in the same session or did it take a while? Come check out my blog at http://lakebrunnerjakobw.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteI REPORTED YOU JAKOB
ReplyDeletefor harassment and bullying
I thought his comment was really constructive.
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